Girl if you don't keep writing i will take it as a personal attack. If you don't publish a book one day. Everything was so beautiful, you put such a harsh topic so nicely. You used exactly the words that neede to be used and you did it so gracefully. It disturbed me in the most beautiful way.
this. you wrote it so HAUNTINGLY. i wrote a piece about my own feelings toward my father and although we differ, there is *that* connection. aaaa words are failing to describe exactly what it is so i'll just leave this to simmer. thank you for sharing this with us!
thank YOU so much for reading :’) and i totally get what you mean by that connection haha sometimes its hard to find the words (even though we are on the writing site) + i’ve bookmarked yours to read when i have the time!
This piece captures so many nuances in a relationship that can be hard to put into words because its been in your life for so long in many complicated ways. I can tell how much thought and care you put into this piece. Thanks for sharing :)
Also this line made my heart melt every time: "he does it out of love, he doesn’t know if you love him"
thank you so much :') was almost gonna disagree on the "thought" part but also ig all the time I spent just thinking abt the relationship in general counts so I also can't disagree
"he doesn't know if you love him" oh my GOD. like my eyes glazed over reading that. your writing is so,,, it's like a broken bone, sharp bits, brittle and raw,,, i <3 it
hi i think our dads were cousins or something because there's no way this isn't ripped right out of some part of me
I'm gonna start telling everyone we're cousins
im gonna start telling everyone this too
Girl if you don't keep writing i will take it as a personal attack. If you don't publish a book one day. Everything was so beautiful, you put such a harsh topic so nicely. You used exactly the words that neede to be used and you did it so gracefully. It disturbed me in the most beautiful way.
oh wow thank you so much 🥹 if I ever manage to write a book I'll be sending you a signed copy for sure 🫡
I am honoured. Before that happens i will be keeping up with your writing on here ❤
this. you wrote it so HAUNTINGLY. i wrote a piece about my own feelings toward my father and although we differ, there is *that* connection. aaaa words are failing to describe exactly what it is so i'll just leave this to simmer. thank you for sharing this with us!
thank YOU so much for reading :’) and i totally get what you mean by that connection haha sometimes its hard to find the words (even though we are on the writing site) + i’ve bookmarked yours to read when i have the time!
This piece captures so many nuances in a relationship that can be hard to put into words because its been in your life for so long in many complicated ways. I can tell how much thought and care you put into this piece. Thanks for sharing :)
Also this line made my heart melt every time: "he does it out of love, he doesn’t know if you love him"
thank you so much :') was almost gonna disagree on the "thought" part but also ig all the time I spent just thinking abt the relationship in general counts so I also can't disagree
Incredible piece.
thank u very much :)
"he doesn't know if you love him" oh my GOD. like my eyes glazed over reading that. your writing is so,,, it's like a broken bone, sharp bits, brittle and raw,,, i <3 it
haha thank you so much! love that i can evoke that kinda imagery too <3
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oh my godddddd this hit way too close to home. i love it and ur so talented.
thank you so much 🥹🫶
I like it
Tyvm ☺️
haunting and beautiful... love this so much<3
Thank u so much :)
you are so talented, the words you hold, the phrases you write, the thoughts the experience, this is really special
omg tysm 🥹🥹🥹 always a delight to hear from u <3
this is hauntingly beautiful, it sets a dread in chest
THIS IS AHHHHHHHHH
OH MY GOD WENYI
Terrific writing!
Tyvm!! 🫶
wow this is so so beautiful it made me feel emotions that i can't even name. cried!! you are so extremely talented, never stop writing <3
oh my god tysm 🥹🥹🥹